Some people say that the government should spend more money taking care of elderly people while others think that government spending should be spent more on the education of young people. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The rational way to use the government’s budget can be considered one of concerns of some people. While it is believed that the government should allocate more money for senior citizens, I advocate that the investment on the education for youngsters is also of great importance.
There are some sounds reasons why the government should use their financial resources to look after the older. The first reason is that old residents have already made a lot of contributions to facilitate the development of their countries in their whole youth. To elaborate it, in the youth, almost all citizens have had to work to not only earn money to cover their basic living expenses but also boost the economic through products exported and taxations or joined in some social activities including free classes which improve living condition of those who come from underprivileged backgrounds. Other than that, although they are retired, sometimes they can create values for the society. For example, in Japan, when the explosion happened in nuclear plants, old people volunteered to solve consequences with a view to avoid adverse effects of nuclear on DNA of younger generations.
Besides, the education of young citizens also needs to be taken into consideration for some compelling explanations. First of all, a country’s future development and progress can be attributed the development of its young citizens, which is because they can be the main labor for their countries. For instance, road infrastructure facilities will be upgraded by young people because senior citizen cannot meet the requirements of this physically demanding activity or youngsters can play a role as representatives in cross-cultural activities with other nations across the globe, which is why they have to be equipped with necessary knowledge and skills such as foreign languages or manner in formal summits. Moreover, this investment can relieve the burden on the society. The reason is that if young people are illiteracy, they can find hard to seek jobs to make end meet, which can be considered as a culprit behind the higher crime rates, particularly robberies or snatch theft.
All in all, although the government has to shoulder the responsibility for taking care of senior citizens due to their contributions to our society, young people also have to be well-educated since they are the future of a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, as for, as to, for example, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22916666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01579590765 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559895833333 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.6609520728 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.461538462 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5384615385 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203241652916 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748649794942 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560927892727 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145023149561 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452744897297 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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