One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you couldn't attend. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
apologies for missing the birthday celebration
Explain why you missed it and why you didn’t tell your friend
Say what you would like to do to show that you are sorry
Hey James,
Hope you’re well! I’m writing to make a huge apology to you.
I know you must be unhappy with me for not attending the celebration at your farmhouse last week. I’m so sorry that I missed the party. You know I was so excited about the birthday bash that is the 30th one.
Let me explain you in detail about what happened when I was leaving for the party. One of uncles met with an accident, and he severely injured his leg so I went to the spot and took him to the hospital. Everything happened in rush which is why I wasn’t able to inform you on call or text.
Obviously, you must be angry at me. But I want to buy you a family ticket for the new amusement park in the town, you need to go there with your children. Don’t you think it will be fun?
Sorry again and hope you’ll forgive me and make a tour!
Best,
Apoorva
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: YOUR_NN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'your'?
Suggestion: your
Hey James, Hope you’re well! I’m writing to make a huge apolog...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...elebration at your farmhouse last week. I’m so sorry that I missed the party. You...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 699.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23636363636 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16581674366 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648484848485 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8249203478 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5454545455 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346777778196 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127875616581 0.0766984524023 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633637714965 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191868986736 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078024070924 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.72 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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