Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
These days, every person should deal with lots of necessary and unnecessary data and information about whatever is related to his or her daily life to survive and make progress. I believe that having the ability of organizing essential and with out it, it is impossible to use those data which we have. I explore my reasons in the following essay.
First and foremost, If we plan for something, we can be more prepared for it and get a better result. For instance, if
I want to apply for a PhD position in a euoropean country, I should follow some steps one by one and even ignoring one of them could result a cetasrophie. One step is preparing for the TOEFL test and if I don't plan for it to study, I can not get a good result in it. Even we can expand this example to the wholeof the education. If we don't plan for our exams and studying, we will not get a good grade, Then probably we lose some opportunities of educating in a good university.
Secondly, with out planing doing administrative works seems impossible
and doing these works arean unseprable part of our modern life. A good example is applying for a visa of a foreign country. You should always carry lots of documents and full fill so many forms which each of them is important. You can not over come these levels without having a check list and following that one by one.
All in all, because of the reasons that I presented above, and some others which I did not mention here, I think it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 284.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42253521127 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54012629976 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542253521127 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6970075643 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6153846154 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25237001784 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796843228951 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858800182364 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125113338193 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937341754364 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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