Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
It has been recently stated that a significant aspect of our life is advertisements. From my personal perspective, however, we should take into account the negative features of advertising before coming to such a conclusion. Not only are there often inconsistencies between the advertisement and the reality but pop-up ads can also be a source of deep annoyance.
The first aspect to consider regarding the problematic sides of advertising is misleading advertisements. We must admit that when we come across a product which was advertised to possess a number of features, it is not uncommon for us to later feel disappointed because the product received turns out to be nothing like how it was advertised. With the advent of e-commerce and online shopping becoming increasingly popular, it is also easier for someone to get tricked by this false advertisement. If an item is cheaper than the average market price, a number of consumers might become attracted without knowing whether the product is authentic. Besides, businesses, such as restaurants and clothes outlets, are paying others to write positive reviews online with the aim of being competitive and luring potential customers.
From another angle, disruptive advertising can cause as much irritation as does receiving goods that are different from advertised. It cannot be denied that the concentration of a person is disrupted whenever he experiences unexpected emergence of ads while minding his own business. For instance, when a person gets to a cliffhanger from a movie, his mood will then completely change after the unskippable pop-up ads appear. As a result, instead of wanting to buy the advertised products, customers even feel not being respected. In addition, another form of advertising which interferes with people’s daily life is repeated cold-calling and spamming texts.
In conclusion, taking account of false advertising and bothersome characteristics of commercials, hardly can we claim that they are entirely positive. Nonetheless, I still believe advertisements are an important marketing tool for businesses and companies.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-10-18 | Trung Vo | 78 | view |
| 2021-10-17 | newbie3107 | 78 | view |
| 2020-12-27 | thanhnguyenqc1985@gmail.com | 84 | view |
| 2020-12-05 | chuhg6771 | 81 | view |
| 2020-12-04 | thanh nguyen qc | 84 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, nonetheless, regarding, so, still, then, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49693251534 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26206189974 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638036809816 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8478598099 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.466666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1395759033 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480076845227 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327653951139 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882247714707 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131460093234 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.