Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, advertising has been a key part of modern business, it leads to the fact that advertising appears all over the place such as on TV, social media, shopping malls or even telemarketing. I admit that there are some potential advantages in this tendency, disadvantage is justifiable.
On the one hand, I cannot deny that advertising brings a great deal of benefits for everyone. One important point is advertisements provide useful information about products and services which are available on the market. For example, some people may be planning to book the holiday for their vacation, but there is a lot of information about accommodation and different range of price, the visitors will be hard to make their decision. Really information advertising can help customers in this situation to find good hotel and to suit their budget. In some cases, advertising is a positive part of our life because of convenience. Customers can remember exactly about products getting through commercial and online advertising if they want to buy a product, therefore consumers can save a lot of time to research.
On the other hand, I consider that advertising is not true and intrusive. In terms of intrusive, we are constantly surrounded by the images and sounds of advertisements, disturbing our privacy. For instance, people regularly receive telesales making calls on their mobile when they are working or meeting. Personally, I feel tired of watching advertising ads on TV when they are usually interrupting my favorite program. Another point should be taken into account that producers tend to tell their quality product which is overrated, it leads to disappointment if the customer buys that product. There is an advertisement for some memory vitamins that it can help to remember everything when customer use it, but it is completely trusting because we have to practice on regular basis and vitamins only have improved function.
In my conclusion, although I can see many merits in advertising when modern business tells the customer about their product I believe that disadvantages are more significant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat disadvantages are more significant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21994134897 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07092876049 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58357771261 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1173651121 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194658135868 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749737196477 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833528175572 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117240601937 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492829728348 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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