In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals as food or other products,
such as medicines and clothing. Do you agree or disagree?
The argument over the animal has been killing for food and fashion industry in recent years. Some people consider that animal should be used as medicines and food because it could be replaced by other resources.
These days, people are faced with many public health challenges, regarding poor health conditions including cancer, obesity or cardiovascular disease caused by excessive consumption of meats on a regular and long-term basic. Experts are calling that people should change in their diets so they can enjoy better health. Fortunately, we can find easily many alternative meat products bought on the market. In fact that, vegetarian diet is being favored by a growing number of people and it can same number of nutrients for consumers. In particular, mushroom and tofu contain high protein of levels, a kind of nutrient presumably only found in meat, therefore we can use it as a substitute.
Furthermore, medical experiment on animal and medicines manufactured from part of body’s animal received little endorsement in the past. Nowadays, herbal and many other type of plant-based medicines such as ginger which cure many disease and support doctor in the treatment of many illness. More seriously, thousands of wild animals are killed each year such as tiger or minks, their fur take to produce coast or accessories for fashion industry. There are similar products made from plats or artificial materials that can fulfill our needs therefore animal do not suffer for our demands anymore.
In conclusion, I think that animal is unnecessary in our demand such as clothing, medicines and food because we can chose different resources from herbal, plants or artificial material.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 497, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...growing number of people and it can same number of nutrients for consumers. In p...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disease seems to be countable; consider using: 'many diseases'.
Suggestion: many diseases
...sed medicines such as ginger which cure many disease and support doctor in the treatment of ...
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Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun illness seems to be countable; consider using: 'many illnesses'.
Suggestion: many illnesses
... and support doctor in the treatment of many illness. More seriously, thousands of wild anim...
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Line 4, column 117, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'choose'
Suggestion: choose
...hing, medicines and food because we can chose different resources from herbal, plants...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, regarding, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27037037037 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75771769018 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640740740741 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7477597919 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.583333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176140272743 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641761086803 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516163459497 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12067068399 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604983104009 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.