In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals as food or other products, such as medicines and clothing. Do you agree or disagree?
It is agrued that in the modern era, animals is no longer importance to use as food or other products such as medicines and clothing. From my point of view, in some situation i mostly disagree with this notion because of its drawbacks for the population life. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the international world and with the appearence of new innovation that the requirement of individuals has been increased graduately, so the production from animals is hugely significant for the society. Not only will this things provide various well quality food with high protein, improving the adolesence immune systerm, but also the creative and imagination of teenagers can be advanced dramatically which have positive affection for the economic background. Furthermore, numerous occapation will be created by this phenomenon, reducing the promotion of unemployment and homeless people in their country. To illustrate, there was a vurvey by Curtin Jorn, the famous scientist and professor which was about the succuss of europian nations where have bright plans to inport animal products. The statistic showed that nearly evey nations has got a plenty of achevement.
However, we can not negate the weakness of this problem for the social. A lot of animal have poison effect which lead harmful influence fot the health of individuals and also the number of many animal will be decreased significantly that the reason for some extinction. Morover, governments take advantage from this investment for their own revenue, demerits cause will be led by this action to the young generation.
To conclude, by my agrument from the essay that i totally disagree with this statement since the animal products have benefits aspect for the society. The state need to have clear plan to improve their citizens for the nation development.
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...will analyse this statement in detail. First of all, in the international world...
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...nificant for the society. Not only will this things provide various well quality foo...
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...tions has got a plenty of achevement. However, we can not negate the weakness ...
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...y this action to the young generation. To conclude, by my agrument from the ess...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22666666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81968477356 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603333333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1088552052 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.615384615 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149617715535 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612808820635 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126174960212 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109671281022 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985335422306 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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