In some countries, owing a house rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In the 21st century, not only young generation, but many other people also hesitate to decide owning their own house or continuing hiring a home. However, for some people, possessing an apartment plays a critical role in their lives. From my point of view, I do believe that this is a positive trend.
There are some obvious reasons to explain this case. Primarily, owning a home for self means an individual can do everything he wants in order to make him convenient and comfortable. For instance, people are able to redesign, reconstruct all furniture in their own house according to their preferences. As a result, they will feel satisfied and relax with the refreshing atmosphere when they go home after hard-working day. Regarding renting housing, because the owner is the landlord, the tenants must keep all furnishings stay same while they have to pay a deposit monthly. Moreover, the confidence of adults is sometimes made of having their own apartment. This is especially important in Eastern countries, such as Vietnam and China. If a person have a meeting with friends or he decides to get married, first things others will ask is about his house.
On the other hand, the advantages of movement cannot be denied. Firstly, it helps the real estate market develops faster; therefore, this industry needs more employees such as real estate intermediary to satisfy the market demand. Thus, this phenomenon have solved partly problem of jobs. In addition, this tendency also brings the frugality to human. If people want to buy a house, they have to make attempt to earn more money and save more money. Instead of going shopping and buying some useless things, they must think carefully to buy necessities for their life. The more accurate they spend money, the faster they have their own houses!
To sum up, I strongly suppose that this tendency is beneficial for society. It initiates from the need of human being about the comfortable place and their appearances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01212121212 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6214135498 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630303030303 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8504521724 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0526315789 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3684210526 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73684210526 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191097477751 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627643387095 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050764210416 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120105386164 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144464715787 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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