Nowadays, people have greater access to fast food. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Over the years, consumption of food has evolved shockingly. In the past, people resorted to eating home, but now people prefer eating food that is quickly available to them. While there are pros to this change, there are some cons that cannot be ignored by us. There are many studies that talk about the disadvantages of fast food, which I agree with. I will be throwing light on the pros as well as the cons today.
Among many advantages, one of the main reasons for the growth of fast food chains is our busy lifestyle. People have become career focussed and spend over 40 hours a week working through the day. Because of this, they end up struggling to find time to eat. But thanks to the convenience of fast food, grabbing a cheeseburger from the nearest fast food joint is just a 20 minute run. This is further proven right by increasing demand for fast food, which has led to the growth in quick service restaurants such as McDonalds and Pizza Huts all over the world. And therefore, convenience has led to a rise in consuming fast food over cooked meals at home.
However, even though convenience is important in today’s day, I believe that the harm fast food brings to our health overtakes the pros of it. The largest evidence of this is the rise in obesity among younger generations across the world. For example, at least one in five children in the US have obesity, and this has only increased over the past few years. Moreover, consuming fast food has other health concerns such as diabetes, blood pressure that eventually lead to strokes and heavy medical bills. Even though fast food chains are more accessible, the convenience of it comes at a cost of your health, which is not worth it.
In conclusion, fast food joints have definitely increased over the years, but the health concerns of consuming it outweighs the convenience of accessing it. And this is becoming an alarming cause of concern all over the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67741935484 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47600780124 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530791788856 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1588023433 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6111111111 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285855672642 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888244862651 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495595588332 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184376095462 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255320114111 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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