Young people influenced by their peers? Do the advantages of peer pressure outweigh the disadvantages?
There is no denying in the fact that man is a social animal.In today's era people are hardly meet with their neighborhood and it also have many drawbacks on society.This essay will discuss about the consequences of this trend and the relevant solutions in the following paragraphs.
To commence with,most of the individuals of the society are become money minded to make their life luxurious and convenient therefore,they neglected to interact with local community.Nevertheless,the advent of internet technology also put more burden on people shoulders and they also doing work from their homes as people find limited hours to participate in their leisure activities and less time to spend with their family members.so,masses rarely community with the society members.
On the further note,to overcome this problems society authority ought to organized some festival event for people get together,which leads to enhance relationship bonding between folks.furthermore,if government should decline the working hours for employees then it would more fruitful for people because it give them more time to spend together.for example,Australian official allowed to individual to do work only 6 hours a day.
In conclusion time management is very significant for everyone because it gives people more time for relaxtion. While, individual can also interchange their cultural values with each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49964688857 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.851884335 49.4020404114 332% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 238.0 106.682146367 223% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.0 20.7667163134 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.2 7.06120827912 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114526599441 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590199631036 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282876608633 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679791025616 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267324179495 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.3 13.0946893788 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.93 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.49 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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