Some people feel that boarding schools are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for many reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and conclude
Although some people tend to believe that enrollment of students in to boarding schools is a good option, there are few others who argue otherwise. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of boarding schools.
To begin with, children studying in boarding schools enjoy the privileges of a wide range of learning opportunities. In other words, due to the enrollment of students from around the world, one has the chance to gain knowledge of other cultures and languages. Moreover, boarding schools provide pupils with an exposure to real world. Children from residential schools have a great range of adaptability when compared to other regular schools. For instance, the Doon school in India is famous for its unique academic curriculum as well as for enabling their students to live life independently.
On the other hand, one of the major issue with students in boarding schools is that they cannot handle the stress. To elaborate, boarding schools often have a reputation in pressurizing their students for achieving better academic results. Moreover, when children can’t work under such pressure, they tend to suffer from mental disorders and finally slipping to depression. Pupils in boarding schools are under constant observation by the administration and are criticized for every task performed. Further, some boarding schools follow strict rules regarding student relaxation time and also limit the number of visitations from parents.
To sum up, although boarding have their fair share of perks only student who can handle the perils that come with them should be enrolled.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that come with them should be enrolled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, as for, for instance, as well as, in other words, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38095238095 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78407449589 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.6202701035 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.307692308 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256897167224 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947131361552 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491608404211 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151794012558 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077079183888 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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