You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel.
Write a letter to the singer. In your letter
– say how you feel about his performance
– give details of your music-related activities
– explain how you would like him to help you with your music-related activities
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. Jones,
I am writing this letter in connection with your latest concert, that was helbd on the 13th of this month. I had the privilege to attend it in person and it was an experience I will remember for a very long time.
Although I was surrounded by thousands of your fans, I truly felt like you were singing to me and your voice made me forget the others around. I was was blown away by your great voice and the range you displayed across different songs. I was impressed not only by how you sang high pitched tones, but also the slow soft numbers.
I am an avid listener of your songs which has helped me learn a lot about music. I have been listening to your songs sfor more than a decade and you have encouraged me to start my own band with some of my fellow classmates. Even though we have a lot of homework, we remove time to practice every weekend and have created an mixed tape of all your famous songs.
I would like to request you to please listen to our versions of your songs from the last album. I have enclosed the CD of this compilation along with this letter. My band and I would really appreciate if we could get a chance to have a one on one session with you to get your feedback on our music.
I look forward to receiving your positive response to my request.
Your sincerely,
Karishma Dave
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Mr. Jones, I am writing this letter in connection w...
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...e I will remember for a very long time. Although I was surrounded by thousands o...
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...ice made me forget the others around. I was was blown away by your great voice and the ...
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...made me forget the others around. I was was blown away by your great voice and the ...
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... tones, but also the slow soft numbers. I am an avid listener of your songs whic...
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... but also the slow soft numbers. I am an avid listener of your songs which...
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... has helped me learn a lot about music. I have been listening to your songs sfor ...
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...me to start my own band with some of my fellow classmates. Even though we have a lot of homework...
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...practice every weekend and have created an mixed tape of all your famous songs. ...
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...an mixed tape of all your famous songs. I would like to request you to please li...
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...g your positive response to my request. Your sincerely, Karishma Dave
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...onse to my request. Your sincerely, Karishma Dave
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31225296443 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29237426448 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581027667984 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.854349545 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9230769231 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273358886476 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970150224106 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531738751698 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137406915457 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744308720749 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.