Some people believe that the cities are the best places to live, in while there are some who disagree with this statement. discuss advantages and disadvantages of living in cities.
City life has become one of the most important issue these days. An increasing number of people suppose that living in city is the best choice for living while the second group do not agree with this idea. I want to write about the merits and demerits of living in city and I intend to write why in my perspective its benefits outweigh its drawbacks in the following paragraphs.
There are some demerits which I want to explain about them. Traffic is the main reason which should not be at first neglected. More precisely, the more private cars are used, the more traffic increase resulting from the existence of more individuals in cities. What is really noticeable in comparison to village is the high amount of air pollution leading to some related disease such as pulmonary disease.
On the other hand, there are a considerable number of the benefits of city life. At first, I should mention to the widely range of facilities in towns. There are more recreational places such as cinemas, concert halls and amusement parks in cities which cause more convenient. Job opportunity can moreover be as another big merits. Based on statistics, the range of entrepreneurship is much more in cities which it for instance leads to more employment in society.
In conclusion, In my perspective its benefits outweigh its disadvantages based on the aforementioned paragraphs .So I personally would rather live in cities than in rural due to the existence of much more occupation opportunities and more facilities.
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- some people believe that the cities are the best places to live in while there are some who disagree with this statement Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in cities 56
- Some people believe that the cities are the best places to live in while there are some who disagree with this statement discuss advantages and disadvantages of living in cities 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, really, second, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99209486166 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88446030209 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573122529644 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6310919991 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1538461538 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223891702939 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728234060371 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812636782412 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13105665338 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866807482876 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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