The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled
coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The given tables detail the statistical survey report comparing the sales figure of coffee and bananas under the brand name 'Fairtrade' in five European countries for two different years 1999 and 2004 respectively.
Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the sales revenue in all but two of the countries with regard to bananas increased significantly over time. Also, among all the countries, the UK witnessed a dramatic jump in the sale of both commodities.
According to the given illustration, to begin with, Switzerland recorded the highest sales in coffee, at 3 million euros, compared to the UK at 1.5, Denmark(1.8), Belgium(1), and Sweden just 0.8 million euros. However, whilst with a marginal ascend Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden went up to 2, 1.7, and 1 million euros in 2004, Switzerland doubled its sales and the UK grew 14 times higher in the respective sales.
Turning to bananas, the UK sold the maximum bananas worth 15 million euros in 1999, however, the same trebled in 5 years period. In addition, Switzerland and Denmark also climbed from 1 to 5.5 million euros and 0.6 to 4 million euros in the given period. In contrast, Belgium, and Sweden experienced a slight plummet, as the former plunged to a million euros from 1.8 in 1999, while the latter slacked down to half of the previous value.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, while, in addition, in contrast, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98666666667 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72225033999 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591111111111 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.7122140764 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.25 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.125 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.23603664747 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18961682216 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851713208127 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106405083145 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138671635536 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127405197483 0.0819641961636 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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