The rules that the societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nnovative work in their regular life. I belive that freedom of thinking, speaking and writi...
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Suggestion: Any
...and writing makes people more creative. any nations growth are depend on their st...
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Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...writing makes people more creative. any nations growth are depend on their students o...
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Suggestion:
... makes people more creative. any nations growth are depend on their students or ...
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Suggestion:
...eople more creative. any nations growth are depend on their students or young pe...
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Suggestion: depended
...more creative. any nations growth are depend on their students or young people. Henc...
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...ehind why I agree with statement is that wide opportunity. In todays fast-growing...
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...odays fast-growing technology, there are many wide spectrum of opportunity availa...
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Suggestion: spectra; spectrums
...rowing technology, there are many wide spectrum of opportunity available to people. The...
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Suggestion: as
...o wants his or her career as successful then needs pick golden opportunity to increa...
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...ulum task beyond their main course work.There are many fields available which needs t...
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Line 3, column 656, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
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Suggestion: be never
...ple follow their seniors work then they never be do any great task. However,some time...
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...y never be do any great task. However,some time societies wants to made stringent ...
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...h as theft, accident, murder, etc. Hence,to avoid heinous crime elder people wants ...
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Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'read'
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...o build rules for them. For example, we reads one or two news about children, who did...
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Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...o news about children, who did crime in news paper everyday. Also we sees that some childr...
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...t children, who did crime in news paper everyday. Also we sees that some children,whose ...
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Suggestion: Also,
..., who did crime in news paper everyday. Also we sees that some children,whose age is...
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...d crime in news paper everyday. Also we sees that some children,whose age is below 1...
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...veryday. Also we sees that some children,whose age is below 15 , are driving a car in ...
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Suggestion: ,
...that some children,whose age is below 15 , are driving a car in the worst way and ...
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Suggestion: So
... should not negate the cons of freedom. so, we have to support those acts of young...
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Suggestion:
...hose acts of young mind which helps them for growth and put some restriction on t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85046728972 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51571389544 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613707165109 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7442304278 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3125 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147600082755 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495974061817 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452119919214 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871727890237 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206371154838 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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