Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children’s time is better spent on more academic subjects.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, more people have started to question wherever school should provide obligatory physical education classes or they are unnecessary and waste of children’s time. There are several points of views on this matter.
First of all, it is important to mention that the obesity became a serious issue for all ages, and some argues that obligatory physical activity at the young age may help in reducing health problems and encourage children be more active in the future. Also, in modern cities there are few places where children can play safely, and school provides a perfect free safe space as well as adult supervision. Some even say that physical activities positively affect on child’s performance in school.
On the other hand, other school subjects take a lot of children’s time and are very important for their future education and career, while physical activity, according to some parents, only distract from learning. And indeed there are schools where children spend the same amount of time on physical education classes and on history or biology.
In my opinion, physical activity is very important for children of all age, but I believe that it is essential to find the right balance between physical education classes and other classes, considering the importance of education for children’s future career.
To conclude, the importance of physical education is widely discussed by many people. The physical activity can affect positively on children health and academic performance, but also many only occupy time that some less active children early dedicated to study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, so, well, while, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33201581028 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66758890352 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569169960474 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5319183794 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.9 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421675478668 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164524905569 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849088819619 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246158794777 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582812686128 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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