People should have the right to carry a gun, as crime rate
is on the increase
One of the most challenging issues of the modern democracy is the increasing crime rate. However, allowing their citizen to carry guns has partially put governments on another problem. It argues that the main cause of criminal conviction is the lack of control on the register of weapons and the emotional rage when using guns.
First of all, those who support possession of weapon justify
their claim with the logic that people have a right to self-defence. As
such, having a gun comes handy in such situations as it is a useful weapon
to protect yourself from criminals who may otherwise endanger your life.
For example, my neighbour, who is wealthy, managed to scare away alleged
robber with his gun and protect his life.
Conversely, many are against letting people carry a gun as they
believe it may only help to aggravate the situation instead, leading to
more crimes. they state that as weapons like guns become easily obtainable,
irrational and illogical use of it may lead to unprecedented and disastrous
outcomes. For example, there had been cases where family members shot each
other on the spur of the moment, based on momentary emotions. Moreover, if
guns are not safely kept when there are children in the house, it may
unknowingly cause accidents and harm both the child and other members
of the family.
In conclusion, though the number of brutal crimes are peaking,
it is still not advisable to carry around guns, as more harm may come from
it than good. it might only help to escalate crime rate further. As such,
it is best that citizenry depended on the law enforcement of a nation rather
than taking matters into their own hand.
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Suggestion: They
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... more harm may come from it than good. it might only help to escalate crime rate ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, however, if, may, moreover, still, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99647887324 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53813163176 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609154929577 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6967883315 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.153846154 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256549838848 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079354812128 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624157445883 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0570814899965 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709805630319 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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