IN MOST SUCCESSFUL COMPANIES, SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT COMMUNICATION BETWEEN EMPLOYERS AND WORKERS IS THE MOST IMPORTANT FACTOR. OTHER PEOPLE SAY THAT OTHER FACTORS ARE MORE IMPORTANT. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.
Communication between managers and subordinate employees has been believed to be one of the most important features contributing to the success of an organization. However, some people think that there are also other factors devoting to companies’ success that may be more essential. I will dicuss both sides of the argument in this essay.
In most companies, employers play the role of making decisions about the direction of the company that they work and employees have the responsibility to implement those decisions. As a result, when it comes to performing these decisions, effective communications are required between bosses and staffs to avoid unexpected misunderstanding. If the workers misinterpret a decidion, the consequences could range from a minor discrepancy, to a serious setback for the organization. Besides, effective communication is also represented in the way managers stay harmoniously with their teamers and value every opinions from them to encourage their contributions to the group. All of these interactions between employers and employees result in the running of the organization as the employers want it to be.
Furthermore, some of the factors that make a company succeed could be considered more important than just communication. For instance, the reliability, talent of managers and the skill of workers. It would be a big issue for a organization if the policy created by the employers is useless or detrimental to its success. In addition, a group may have the best manager but if there is not skilled and reliable work force, progress will be slow and success will be difficult to come by. I believe that these two factors may be equivalent or even surpass the important of the role of communication between employers and workers in running a company.
In conclusion, communication between managers and worker plays an important part in the company’s success. However, to have a better communication, an organization need to have talented managers and skilled workforce so as to achieve the most successful result.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...zation. However, some people think that there are also other factors devoting to companies’ success ...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...mployers want it to be. Furthermore, some of the factors that make a company succeed cou...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...of workers. It would be a big issue for a organization if the policy created by t...
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Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...talented managers and skilled workforce so as to achieve the most successful result.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36923076923 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31682317532 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526153846154 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1837286943 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309298698868 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103160257955 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935904480875 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202204475494 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912836489631 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.