The following tables show the average commuting time for employees at five companies and the average number of employee absences at each company per year

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The following tables show the average commuting time for employees at five companies and the average number of employee absences at each company per year.

The two given tables give information about the amount of time employees of five different companies spend travelling to work and the number of absences per person on an annual basis. Overall, the longer it takes employees to commute to their workplace, the more likely they are to be absent from work.
On average, the staff of King and Co. spend 75 minutes travelling to their company, which is the highest amount of commuting time, and this company also has the largest number of 18 absences. In contrast, the number of 10 absences of the workers of Futureform is the lowest among the five companies. Correspondingly, it takes their employees only 15 minutes to travel from and to work.
In terms of commuting time, the employees of E and B and Haleston usually spend an hour and 45 minutes respectively. Both of these companies share the same number of 16 absence instances per staff member. Lastly, the two figures for New Look are both smaller than those for Haleston and E and B. To be more specific, there are just 10 instances of annual absence per employee who generally spends half an hour commuting to work.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, look, so, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73469387755 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62720921098 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540816326531 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.2134317978 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.111111111 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290263970664 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121316734937 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579306949901 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210052938547 0.12726935374 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357651036073 0.0580467560999 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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