Many people spend a lot of money on clothes, haircut and beauty product to enhance their appearance. Some people think that it is a good way to spend money while others think there are better ways to spend it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nobody would dispute the fact that in this modern era individuals are extremely interested in grooming their personality. Some people contest that money spent on clothes, haircut and beauty items are worth and beneficial. However, others argue money can be spent on some other relevant things. Personally, I am in favor of former view.
Apparently, convincing statements can be made that spending money to propel one's outlook has more constructive benefits. To begin with, fashionable clothes and trendy hair cut significantly promote confidence in individuals. In other words, having an attractive appearance builds a sense of optimistic attitude which leads to a confident personality; therefore, this stimulates a person's capability to overcome any challenges. Moreover, people who belong to entertainment industry are required to look perfect every time, for which they have to spend abundant money on their looks. Otherwise, if they will not care about the physical looks then their goodwill may confront negative repercussions. Research suggested that people who are public figures spend half of their income on themselves for better appearance.
Nevertheless, money spent on necessities is worth for those who have limited income. Although, caring about looks is vital, many other basic needs are there which cannot be overlooked. To exemplify, middle class person spending money on education for their children and good food is more worthy rather than splurging income in other things. Not only basic needs but money spent on buying something useful is also favorable. Subsequently, for a businessman money invested in some profitable venture can result in inclusive profits.
To conclude, both sections of people have their own credible reasons. Despite, being normal income person, people still like to spend on themselves to look better. In my profound opinion, personality grooming gives a sense of accomplishment to minds of individuals. It entails more added merits as compared to its use in other things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...n be made that spending money to propel ones outlook has more constructive benefits....
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Line 2, column 379, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...rsonality; therefore, this stimulates a persons capability to overcome any challenges. ...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...pearance. Nevertheless, money spent on basic necessities is worth for those who have limited inc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48562300319 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86977796267 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638977635783 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1961657443 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3684210526 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4736842105 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297209103458 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841792097303 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057675487333 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17822543042 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149043783186 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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