Many people associate money with happiness and think that the more money one has, the happier they should be. Do you agree with this statement? Give examples from your experience.?
Irrefutably, money plays a significant role by providing multiple benefits to human beings. A set of individuals believe that nowadays money is directly related to a person's happiness. I firmly agree with this view and will discuss this notion in detail in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, these days the needs of families are kept on increasing and to fulfil them money is utmost important. Explaining in detail, due to the high inflation rate every system requires a large amount of money. Even, a better education system needs a huge sum of money, starting from primary schools to university fees. For instance, last year my brother took admission in MBBS and it cost us exorbitantly. Thus, money eliminates all the worries and lead towards a relaxed life.
Moving further, it is also believed that money plays a vital role in fulfilling the dreams and desires of an individual. If a person is aiming to buy a luxurious home then it would only be possible, if he spends a handsome amount on it. Admittedly, it is a source of joy for many people, because the majority of the generation is not able to afford good housing facilities. For example, according to a recent survey done by the Daily Times, it was found that around 20% of people who have equipped them with good apartments or houses are happier than others who do not.
In conclusion, after discussing my views in above-mentioned paragraphs, I opine by saying that money is extremely valuable and makes a person happier as compared to others. As, when the needs of people are fulfilled then they automatically feel themselves on "Cloud Nine".
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ely valuable and makes a person happier as compared to others. As, when the needs ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92753623188 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86268572222 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663043478261 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3239343938 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230303793384 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660639274015 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366971809386 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126720043189 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300597498318 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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