Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Our current way of life will have a negative impact on future generations.
As the tech is improving day by day lifestyle of people is also changing generation by generation. In my not so humble opinion, I mostly agree with the statement that our current way of life will have negative impact on feature for following reasons.
First and foremost, as world is progressing it is blatant that in the field of technology humans are making some major progress. As new tech are coming in the market which is making everyone’s life easier and our next generation will totally become lazy due to this advancing in the field of tech. For instance, in the olden days when mobile were not their everyone was knowing each other numbers but as the tech advance and mobile took birth in this world people start saving numbers in their phone it is plausible that due to this activity people started become more lazy. By seeing this example it is blatant that tech will advance more and our feature generation may get lazier.
Moreover, as people are advancing field of medicines are also advancing more medicine are created for small illness and people are consuming this entire chemical every now and then. If this continues people will get cure easily from small problem but their immune system will not become strong their body will not learn to fight. For instance one can exemplify, if a person is taking or consuming lots of medicine he/she will get cure for a while but in the long turn it will have adverse effect on his/her life he/she may even die earlier. If this continues then our feature generation’s immune system will be very week and they may experience short life span.
Finally, as population is increasing day by day and due to modern health care facilities more number of people is alive, it is blatant that everyone will require more space to live and result of that is trees are getting reduced day by day. By the time of our next generation more trees will be cut down which will have adverse effect on coming generation. For instance, as trees will be cut down oxygen level will reduce which will create health issue like migraine, heart problem etc ozone layer will also get faded and people will come in direct contact with UV rays which are very harmful for skin. If this happens to be true than coming generation will face lots of problem.
In conclusion, this is how our current way of life will have negative impact on feature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As the tech is improving day by day lifest...
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Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[2]
Message: The verb know is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'knew'
Suggestion: knew
...ays when mobile were not their everyone was knowing each other numbers but as the tech adva...
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Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ays when mobile were not their everyone was knowing each other numbers but as the tech adva...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...ople are consuming this entire chemical every now and then. If this continues people will get cure...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'number' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: number
...nd due to modern health care facilities more number of people is alive, it is blatant that ...
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Line 7, column 604, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...V rays which are very harmful for skin. If this happens to be true than coming gen...
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Line 7, column 664, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of problems'.
Suggestion: lots of problems
...e true than coming generation will face lots of problem. In conclusion, this is how our ...
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Line 7, column 681, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g generation will face lots of problem. In conclusion, this is how our current w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 9.8082437276 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6968973747 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30223560665 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472553699284 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7868064227 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.2 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9333333333 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262868302545 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12020231008 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136061028801 0.0737576698707 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225536659118 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141816403239 0.0645574589148 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.