More and more people are migrating to cities in search of better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain difficulties of living in a city.? How governments make urban life better for everyone? 2018607180
The number of people moving to large metropolises with the hope of a better future is rising dramatically. This essay will look at some challenges of living in urban areas and several solutions that governments could take to enhance the quality of life for all citizens.
The main problem for everyone who wants to move to a large city is that the cost of living is likely to be much higher than their small homeland. Residents of the urban areas have to handle a higher price for bills such as accommodation, transport, and even food. Another consequence of living in the city is people have to cope with traffic congestion. Being stuck on the street causes stress, tiredness, and lower work efficiency. For example, people in Hanoi have to wait on the road for hours during the rush hour every single day. Therefore, people usually late for work and being exhausted after work.
There are various steps that the government could take to tackle the problems. Firstly, governments could construct several buildings, which affordable for immigrants to diminish the financial burden. Besides, more employment should be created, which provide a sustained income for settlers. Third, the number of private vehicles that individuals own should be limited. Besides, politicians should encourage people to use public transport by improving its quality to attract people. The problem of traffic would be reduced when the number of public transport passengers increases.
In conclusion, various steps could be taken to reduce the unaffordable cost of living and traffic jams, which are the two main problems of urban life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, look, so, therefore, third, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15589353612 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67281719732 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58174904943 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5216278588 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.4 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249828382407 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712438829016 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447466293377 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13779218531 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340240858294 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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