The chart below shows the number of users of popular social media sites over time

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The chart below shows the number of users of popular social media sites over time.

The provided table gives information about the number of social platform users from 2006 to 2013. Overall, few social media sites were popular since the beginning of the period, while the rest started being familiar after 2006.

In 2006, Myspace was the most popular site with the amount of 62 million users, followed by LinkedIn for 8 million. However, the popularity of Myspace was gradually decreasing until almost the end of the period, while LinkedIn slowly went up every year and reached 260 million enjoyers. Not only LinkedIn that successfully gained more users but also Facebook as the top social media site downloaded in the world, with 1,200 million users, followed by Twitter in the second of 1,000 million people. In addition, there are social platforms that became known by the halfway of the years such as Instagram, Line, and Pinterest, with the highest for 300 million downloaders in Line.

In conclusion, Myspace was placed at the top at the beginning of the period, subsequently began the least famous in the end even it had a little step up from the previous year.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, second, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97267759563 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44253126318 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617486338798 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.5983065185 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175185686924 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087572916626 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624949481446 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117736232967 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954996245553 0.056905535591 168% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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