Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you have prepared for him/her.
In your letter, you should:
-describe the gift
-tell how it will be delivered
-explain why you chose it.
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds in pink of your health and expect the house warming ceremony went splendidly well.
I’m sorry I couldn’t make it to the opening of your new because of my final examinations next week. Hence I have scheduled a delivery of gift by one of my cousins, Stephen, who happens to be in Paris on a vacation.
This present is from your wish list and also which I’m aware will be enjoyed by you and your kids equally. It is a new PS5 latest edition with HALO series bundle. It comes with 2 controllers and an additional joystick. I was able to source it by help of a friend who works for Sony as a program manager.
Knowing how much you like playing games on PlayStation during your leisure time, I could not think of a better thing to give when I came to know about the availability of PS5. I’m sure this will complement your new Sony High resolution TV superbly which is installed in the new home.
That will be all for now. I shall come by and visit you and Emma once I’m done with my semester.
Your Friend,
M
- In some countries people of all age groups are engaging in too many sports or over exercising Are there more advantages or drawbacks to this development 89
- A person s health is their own responsibility rather than the government s responsibility To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 84
- Do you agree or disagree that the world was a better place decades ago that it is today Why do you think so Give specific details and examples to support your answer 84
- Most employers do job interviews before offering a position to a person Do you think this is the best way to do it or are there better alternatives What is the best method of choosing employees in your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any 84
- With the development of modern society is the loss of traditional ways of life Is it important to keep our traditional ways of life How can this be achieved 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...use of my final examinations next week. Hence I have scheduled a delivery of gift by ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o happens to be in Paris on a vacation. This present is from your wish list and ...
^^^
Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'PS5 the latest'.
Suggestion: PS5 the latest
... you and your kids equally. It is a new PS5 latest edition with HALO series bundle. It com...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...plement your new Sony High resolution TV superbly which is installed in the new h...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32663316583 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37759080944 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653266331658 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8429788102 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.75 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339577529396 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116335199748 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909170202482 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148282754546 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364239227299 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.