Your friend needs help and you need to take a day off at your work to help him/her. Write a letter to your manager about the following.
Why and when do you need to take a day off
How will you compensate for the time you took as a day off
Dear John,
I am writing to inform you about my need to take a day off. I will not demand it in this week because I know there is a deadline to meet on saturday. Please grant it on next monday, 21st of January.
Let me explain my situation in detail. There is a friend of mine, who lives in other city and her delivery based on C-section is scheduled in the evening of coming saturday. Unfortunately, her husband employer booked his ticket to France for a meeting. She also has no family to take care of her. I have to left just after office hours and reach to her to take her hospital, it will be 2 hours drive from here.
I know that you will concern about making up my time for this day off. Well, I want to tell you that I am willing to reimburse my absence time by doing 2 hours overtime per day in the next week.
Looking forward to your reply.
Thanks for your anticipation.
Yours sincerely,
Arfa Jabeen
X.Y.Z.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I am writing to inform you about my need...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r your anticipation. Yours sincerely, Arfa Jabeen X.Y.Z.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31638418079 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34529294361 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638418079096 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7920279245 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.7692307692 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6153846154 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53846153846 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360259944089 0.216113520407 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108457399268 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113766370503 0.0603063233224 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174861719878 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858790421289 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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