It was predicted that people in the 21st century would have much more free time than in the past. To what extent has this prediction come true?
Currently there is a contentious argument that whether the people in the 21st century get more free time than the primitive era? Although the technological advancements and access to latest gadgets has certainly made life easier for the current generation, however, I don’t think that the current generation has more free time that the people of primate era. In this essay I will discuss both the views and then explain that why I don’t agree about the latter.
Beyond any qualms there are myriads of logical reasons that prove that the people have access to machines that perform better in terms of quality and quantity when compared to the manual work. Time and effort to do daily jobs of laundry and vegetable chopping can be performed within a fraction of seconds. For example, a housewife of primitive time with a home maker of 21st century the work efficiency with the help of modern machines has certainly reduced the work load by almost one tenth of what it used to be in the past. There is a dough maker, bread maker, food processor, automatic washing machine, dish washer to the aid. Furthermore, work of men at workplace is also reduced. Earlier calculations and register work consumed so much time and sometime a small mistake could ruin the whole work of a bank accountant. However, such task can be performed within hours on a computer table.
On the contrary some people believe that free time has increased but the free time is wasted by younger generation in useless activities such as mobile phones. But has the free time for the people in the 21st century really increased? I doubt! With increase in the work efficiency people are provided heaps of more work in the office. For instance, most of the females prefer to work in offices instead of becoming a housewife. Considering the nine hours work shift, commute time, cooking time everything is preplanned as a daily routine. The slightest free time that the new generations get post work hours, they spend it by being constantly glued to their mobile phones where they need to gain social approval from their Facebook friends. Issues of loneliness, anxiety and suicide rate has increased three fold than the past.
In conclusion, I believe that improvement in work efficiency has only increased the work threefold for the people. The current generation hardly gets free time as the busy daily routine keeps them on toes. Would the modern technology ever be able to help us get free time? Still remains a question.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
...e technological advancements and access to latest gadgets has certainly made life easier ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, really, second, so, still, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88470588235 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53059452511 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536470588235 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8335808002 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8571428571 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2380952381 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47619047619 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222269798913 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689058485043 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729077917542 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139016778827 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460328611949 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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