Everyone should eat vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problem.
Do you agree or disagree?
While there is a contradiction of eating non vegetarian food, vegan food supports healthy lifestyle. To be very precise, I strongly believe that eating herbivore will never make you obese at the same time will refrain your health from high risk diseases.
Firstly, people eating leafy vegetables can maintain their weight. Diet containing vegetables helps giving more energy as it does not contain any fat. For Example, People going on fat loss program are often suggested to eat diet that contains essential vitamins such as Vitamin D, vitamin c and these can be found in vegetables and fruits such as cabbage, carrot and oranges. Also, eating vegetables such as tomatoes keeps skin tighten and glowing. Thus, putting yourself on vegetables and fruits will make you look young and healthy.
Secondly, it has been observed that having carnivore diet can lead into high cholesterol that can be the main reason for heart attack. Fleshy food contains high level of saturated fat and are not easily digestible. Although food like fish is a great source of vitamin d, cannot be eaten of daily basis. For instance, people eating red meat are prone to gain weight at the same time they can suffer from high blood pressure. Therefore, it is advisable not to have fleshy food in diet on daily basis so s to avoid diseases like kidney disorders and cancer.
To recapitulate, I would rather say that having green vegetables that contain numerous vitamins will support long life system without being getting hit by any risk disease as in case of non-vegan food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 100, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to give' or 'give'.
Suggestion: to give; give
...eight. Diet containing vegetables helps giving more energy as it does not contain any ...
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Line 2, column 207, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested eating'.
Suggestion: suggested eating
...ple going on fat loss program are often suggested to eat diet that contains essential vitamins s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97318007663 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44762521409 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63601532567 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7928221196 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169556736715 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632484097576 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046311412386 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965170056318 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579939936298 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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