Some people believe that our happiness depends on how much money we have. Others say that money cannot buy happiness.
Do you think that having money is the key to happiness, or are there more important factors?
Money is one of the important necessities in human life, many people judge that money is as main determiner of human happiness. However, some people do not think so. Happiness is not able to be bought by money. As an individual, money is not every thing, many things influence the happiness.
All people use part of their life time to work for earning money to survive their life. They need many things in their life which need money to get them, because nothing free in the world, every thing needs money. For instance, firstly, people comfortable house for living together with their family, it ...
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because nothing free in the world
because nothing is free in the world
people comfortable house for living together with their family,
people need comfortable house for living together with their family,
We have to make balance them.
We have to keep them in balance .
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