Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Living today is more comfortable and easier than when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nostalgia is a trait of human minds that makes us reminiscent of the past. As nostalgic as one might be, nobody can deny the fact that life today is way easier than the life it was when our grandparents were little. I strongly agree with the statement in the prompt for several reasons.
Firsly, science and technology has come so far today from where it was in our grandparents' time. It has brought many comforts that were not even imaginable in the past. For example, living in a third-world country, our grandparents did not have electricity in their childhood, meaning they had no electric bulbs to illuminate their rooms, ceiling fans for comfort or water pumps to provide constant water supply. These are just some technologies without which we cannot imagine to go on with our everyday life. Improvement in the technology sector has undoubtedly made our life easier and more agreeable.
Further, automated industries have made products of our need available to everyone at very low cost. In early days when our grandparents were children, price of decent clothing were very high as they were made with handlooms, which required a great amount of manual labor and time for production. Consequently, poor people were known to wear little clothings that revealed their status at the very first sight and reuse it fr a long time. But with the use of automated machines, thousands of feet of fabrics can be produced within a very short time period and many dresses can be sewn and put together automatically by different machines. Introducing automation to the industries has made necessary commodities more available to everyone than ever.
Lastly, in the earlier time, people had little to no access to the vast amount of information contemporary to their time. So many of those people possessed narrow outlook like a frog in the well. There was no medium to disseminate information from one corner of the world to another. Thanks to the information technology, people now have access to more information meaning they can be privy to many opportunities to avail that might have been unknown to them in the distant past. This enables a man to transform their desire into reality and take whichever course they want to take in their life. Status of an individual is more fluid in the society than it was before, meaning one can have numerous ways to prosper if one wants so.
There are many more examples to strengthen my position such as availability of automobiles, improvement in health care sector, higher level of awareness, sense of rights and duties among citizens that can be presented. So to sum up, living today is undoubtedly more comfortable and easier than that my grandparents experienced when they were little.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'imagine going', 'imagine gonna'.
Suggestion: imagine going; imagine gonna
...me technologies without which we cannot imagine to go on with our everyday life. Improvement ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, lastly, look, so, then, third, well, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2280.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77143135546 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536956521739 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 726.3 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9351995954 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.571428571 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9047619048 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180644809381 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559595997375 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646956375707 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117924935872 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578453320946 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.