You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to notify you about my current accommodation problem cause by roommate
Jason. My name is Sumeet Patel and I am living in room number 250 of college campus hostel. I am
living with Jason for last three month but his activities are unacceptable and unmanageable.
Let me explain my situation in details. I am living in this room for about one year. My previous
roommate was very rational and polite. He is also inclined toward study and work like me. On other
hand, Jason is completely irrational and rude. He use to play loud music all over the night and invite
his friends for late night parties. I try to explain my problem to him but he totally ignores my request and keeps doing his activities. I am planning to take extra courses in the upcoming term for that I need to study more but because of this problem, I am thinking that I am not able to concentrate on my study.
I would kindly like to request you for alternative proper accommodation in another room. I am fine with shared accommodation as far as my roommate will rational and polite also inclined toward study and work.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Love.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65887850467 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68711092344 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598130841121 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2942510374 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4666666667 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2666666667 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.13333333333 4.34317383033 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20479434553 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710111144985 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642695998008 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099391944535 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777668262917 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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