The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
A society is a place occupy by individuals of similar cultural heritage and as the saying goes; Youths are the leaders of tomorrow. The structure of the society must be well defined among the youths as it is the major determinant in knowing the kind of leaders that will be produced by the country in future. Instilling a sense of cooperation among the youths at societal level has more merits than instilling in them a sense of competition.
Cooperation brings about unity among individuals in a particular region as most of the inventions that have come about in the planet is via cooperation among those that are involved. The coming about the Atomic Model by Rutherford is due to the fact that, he instructed his students, Masden and Geiger, to carry out series of experiments which they acceded to and cooperate with one another to get the required results.
Furthermore, cooperation among leaders of a country from various ethnic group do bring about smooth running of the country with the country, fast ahead when it comes to decision making. This is conspicously lacking in Nigeria as various representative from different states have their own say and the unity is not there. This has brought setback to the country in terms of restructuring as leaders from different states have disparate opinions.
In addition to this, cooperation in sport is paramount as it makes the team to achieve success. For example, in a football team where all players are ready to play to one another and also provide the necessary assist for a player in position to score will make the team victorious than a team that are playing to gallery and each player does like one another.
Though, in some aspect in life, a sense of competition is needed in order to achieve the desire goal. case study is world cup where nations from different continent compete with one another for the covetious trophy but looking indept, cooperation among each team is the major key to achieving that success of lifting the trophy.
In conclusion, as far as competition has it's own merits in life, sense cooperation of cooperation has more merits than sense of competition as cooperation among nations of the world will make peace to continue to reign without going back to the era of world war, which decimated major parts of the planet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, still, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 395.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8582278481 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69377795542 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493670886076 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8186080297 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.615384615 118.986275619 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3846153846 23.4991977007 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 5.21951772744 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136821020154 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470383154442 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434758283131 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712818412085 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403455499286 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.