The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.
What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
An enormous use of internet has changed the way people share and utilize information. However, this development has lead to numerous issues. In my discourse ahead, this essay will outline threats of this trend including hijacking of social media accounts, misusing of personal information and propose plausible solutions to curb them in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the first and most important menace of increased use of internet is ever-increasing cases of cyber hijacking. This is because some cyber attackers easily crack the security of social media accounts and update highly controversial posts. This ruins the image of people. A good case in point can be a debatable post by hacker in Rahul Gandhi's twitter account decreased his followers and increased opponents of him during the prime minister election in India in 2014. Furthermore, another prime problem is misuse of personal photos and information. To be more specific, people can easily download images of celebrities and girls. These photos can be used for many illegal activities.
To solve this problem, certain measures should be taken by both government and people. One pragmatic solution is that authority should strengthen cyber security with the help of technical experts. These experts do scrutiny of cyber crimes. Ultimately, this would reduce cyber crimes and save celebrities from unnecessary mental stress. In addition, another prominent step which should be taken by mass is that they should set strong passwords for their social media accounts. For an instance, a password should contain one number, capital alphabet and sign instead of keeping simple password, which cannot be easily cracked.
In conclusion, it is an undeniable fact that internet becomes part and parcel of people's lives nowadays. This has raised problems of stealing personal information and increased number of cyber attacks. However, it can be solved by stringent measures taken by government and awareness of people while setting passwords for their social media accounts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tant menace of increased use of internet is ever-increasing cases of cyber hijack...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46372239748 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74993475011 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593059936909 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2234526454 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1578947368 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6842105263 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113553849709 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377393341403 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395287950096 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767945957688 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246709210095 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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