The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed but it has also created problems that did not exist before. what are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions you can suggest.
The internet has changed many habits in our daily life, even the information how it has published and used. this constantly brings issues such as waste of time management, and unhealthy habits, however, there are differents methods which can be adopted to solve these problems.
First of all, the technological development brought a lot of devices which make our life economic, easier, and faster,such as, cleaning robots, electrical cars, and computers which are connected to the internet, mainly became indispensable in our days. Despite the fact that, there are many problems related to the internet. First,the most serious one is the lack of time management, for example, if the individual is waiting for an important e-mail or Skype call, he will waste his time only in checking his accounts. Secondly, spending a lot of time surfing in the internet brings negative effects on children's development,for instant, sitting in one place for a long time increache the chance of obesity, weaken in muscles and joints, and multiple studies suggest that it can even cause weaken in eyesight, moreover it can affect their emotional intelligence for instance, studies shows that many young people skip their studies or scholl and choose surfing in the internet instead.
To avoid these negative effects, parents should began at first by updating the schedule of their kids in way they do research in one hour or two in maximum, secondly encourage them to practice outside activities, above all, they should check the websites visited by their children, and block the inuseful ones.
To sum up, internet has many Bad effects, however parents should take precautions to avoid these effects.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2156133829 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84069361634 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631970260223 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.213768115 49.4020404114 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 200.428571429 106.682146367 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4285714286 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.8571428571 7.06120827912 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122535950365 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630853284269 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453950551639 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624103533957 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372181323567 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.0946893788 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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