The media is increasing interest in famous people who have ordinary background, why do think people are interested in the lives of famous people? Do you think this is a good thing?
The media has changed our daily life, in the same way the life of wellknown people, by giving them more importance, especially those who have high credentials, consequently, people following them, because they are inspiring, and motivating from them, also there are who watching them just by curiosity. From my point of view this is a good thing.
First of all, the development of social media has transformed to make our life easier, faster in getting with the others, moreover, it made the whole world smaller. Therefore, individuals can easily follow outstanding people, such as, personal blogs, musicians, actors, fitness trainers, and writers , because they are inspiring and learning from them. For example, from my oun experience I follow opera because she is always makes me feel strong and face issues no matter how it big.
In the other hand, it seems to me that people are interested to follow lives of celebrities by curiosity, as we know that most of celebrities are rich, they spend money in purchasing expensive clothes,and accessories, in additional, they are often travelling to discover places around the world. For instante, family of anassala, last September they posted video of their party in Dubai in Burdj KHalifa on YouTube, they reached millions followers because of that vedio, and I should montion that am among the viewers who watched the vedio by curiosity.
From my point of view, following lives of famous people is not bad, firstly, because motivational people make others feel the sence of fulfilment, and make them see the reality, and the right way to persuade. Secondly, watching their journeys allow depressed people to discharge negative thoughts, and make things interesting.
To sum up, I believe strongly that the development of media has changed people's lives to the better way, to inspire and learn from famous people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: have; haven
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the celebrities') or simply say ''most celebrities''.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, such as, first of all, to sum up, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17105263158 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70654496527 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615131578947 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.4040815264 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.2 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.4 7.06120827912 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177895123485 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769224455124 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616926472989 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112756672243 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645132339799 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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