Some people believe that uniforms at work places aren’t necessary. Do you agree or disagree with it? Give your own opinion and include examples from your experience.
Recently, the question of clothes in the company has been brought to public attention. Some prefer freestyle clothes to uniforms at workplaces. Personally, I am in favor of dresscode at work for several reasons.
To start with, there is a common belief that uniforms are one of the most viable methods to advertise corporations. To illustrate, most working clothes are designed with unique logos and spectacular styles, attracting customers’ attention. Thanks to dresscodes, customers can identify products and services of the company. Take Mc Donald’s for example, a large number of worldwide fast food eaters can realize its staff because of the uniform in red color and a big symbol of “M”.
Furthermore, many people hold the view that dresscodes contribute to security at workplaces. To be specific, there are hundreds of employees in many different job area in enormous companies and factories. Thus, it comes as no surprise that security staff find it hard to control and cope with unauthorized persons if workers put on freestyle clothes.
On the other hand, some employees hold the opinion that uniforms bring a sense of annoyance for them. Some offices clothes are low-quality and unsuitable for workers. For instance, the handful of female uniforms are short body skirt which is difficult for women workers to move when thay must wear it all working time. No one can deny this idea, but dresscodes in the corporation create a professional environment as well as making a prominent impression on customers.
Considering all of the factors above, dresscodes bring considerable benefits at the workplaces.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28185328185 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97199000949 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625482625483 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8678160719 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126910377072 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439256777238 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379575989018 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665355119148 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248790375457 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.