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Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete
a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after
school and gain experience in the world of work.
How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?

It is probably true to say that most people believe that a university degree is the only
way to get a good job. I think this is true in certain areas, while in other areas, a
degree is not as useful.
To begin with, many people have ambitions to become a qualified professional and there
is no doubt that becoming a doctor or a lawyer, for example, is only possible with a
degree. Another advantage of graduating from university is that it gives you more
choices when it comes to choosing a job. Most employers will be more impressed by a
candidate who has a degree than they would be by one who only has high school
qualifications because it shows a certain level of intelligence and education, as well as
the commitment and self-discipline that is needed In order to study a degree course for
three or four years.
On the other hand, there might be some benefit to starting your career early, especially
if your chosen field is one which does not typically require a university education. This
would apply to somebody who wants to be a car mechanic, or a fashion designer, for
instance, who would not necessarily gain anything from going to university. The handson
experience you gain in your job while others are studying for a degree can give you
a distinct advantage. I once read
about a man who left school at sixteen and
went on to become a wealthy and successful investment broker. He claimed that he had
learned all he needed to know by working in his chosen field and that he could not have
done any better by getting a degree.
So, to conclude, it is possible to get a good job without going to university. Having said
that, some professions, such as the law, require you to have a degree and as stated
above a University degree could potentially open more doors when looking for a job.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...areer early, especially if your chosen field is one which does not typically require...
^^^^^
Line 20, column 56, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...needed to know by working in his chosen field and that he could not have done any be...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, while, for example, i think, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62996941896 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67946805291 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532110091743 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.1384542775 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.166666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222161400183 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815354882525 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623707292353 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0520542377283 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453125485593 0.056905535591 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, while, for example, i think, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand

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