Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. Discuss
Successful career is a desire of every youth of the modern world. However, it is argued that today acquiring a master's degree in a particular field is must to achieve a prominent job opportunity, while it is the opinion of many that work experience gained just after schooling is much beneficial in achieving career goals. This essay will discuss both the views in detail.
A course certification from a reputed University is highlight of a job aspirant's resume. Apparently, higher education is expensive and time-consuming, but ensures a stable job and fixed income source. For instance, to become a neurosurgeon, it takes years of practice and lots of money, but an eminent neurosurgeon makes more fortune by his work during his life-time. However, some find it mundane to work in a particular field for whole life.
Some people believe that, a earlier work experience, just after school, is more helpful in bagging a job.
Workplaces filled with employees of every age group and varied experience, dealing with them could be really challenging. In such scenarios, if a person has an experience gained from an internship will be fruitful. Also, working in different places at a young age, teaches them to be confident in their work. Although, less pay and improper working hours are lackluster to these type of jobs.
All in all, despite having certain merits and demerits of both the claims, it is completely a decision of an individual to pursue a career. Having a college course is good in some cases, while a demand of some work experience is needed for few jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...masters degree in a particular field is must to achieve a prominent job opportunity, wh...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...akes more fortune by his work during his life-time. However, some find it mundane...
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Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ole life. Some people believe that, a earlier work experience, just after sch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, really, so, while, for instance, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96981132075 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8654259225 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607547169811 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5255551432 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0714285714 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275460762388 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803622637005 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548878728475 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141698945794 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353602040906 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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