Topic: overcrowding in large cities has always been problems, but with populations aorund the world about to double, the social problems are certin to multiply. What measures can you suggest to control the problems?
While overcrowded state in large cities around the world is an extremely serious concern, that global populations increase double these days also put intense pressure on social services and public issues. In this essay, some solutions will be given and discoursed tackle these problems.
Several methods are strongly worth mentioning to solve these matters. One of the most significant measures is applying effectively family planning on a global scale. Every married couple should have a maximum of two children to easily manage to make a good living and reduce burdens for society such as education, health, occupations, … As a result, the average living standard will increase and people will possess a happy life and more relaxed time in comparison to that earning the money exhaustedly to maintain a miserable living. A clear illustration is that the countries executing meritoriously birth control are desperately developed ones. The reason is that the income meets the material demands of citizens and they live comfortably due to the money they receive.
Not to mention that, the government should pay undivided attention to building and developing the local economy, especially in remote areas. If this solution can be efficiently carried out, the population will be re-distributed more logically. Therefore, local people will be able to stay in their hometown and contribute to local growth instead of gathering in large cities and leading to population explosion exerting an adverse impact on the social life of urban dwellers. By implementing these methods, overcrowded situations in the cities will be gradually eliminated and population balance between regions in countries will be established.
In conclusion, it is widely considered those dense populations in big cities and in the world result in the number of negative corollaries that can be obviously seen. Hence the solutions which can solve these problems absolutely must be executed as soon as possible to gain the highest effect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 168, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...corollaries that can be obviously seen. Hence the solutions which can solve these pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40445859873 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87970123732 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62101910828 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.3438491796 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.538461538 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143782685629 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458923005576 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047030463337 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912007851587 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468736329064 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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