The image below shows the process of making carbonated drinks.
The diagram gives information about the process of generating carbonated drinks in factories.
From an overall prospective, this procedure has 5 various steps utilizing various devices as well as several ingredient which the final product will be sent to supermarkets.
In the first stage, raw water has been conducted to filter before not only chemicals, but also water softener have been added to it. Then, the clean water has been pumped to electronic heaters. Cooling pipe has been released, subsequently, to a tank where carbon dioxide will be joined into the process.
In the third stage, carbonated water has gone to a mixing tank where it is an appropriate time to add coloring, syrup and flavor to the drink. Another filter has required in the following step before water is filled into bottles and cans. Packaging is the final phase where all the products will be sent to shops by trucks across the cities.
- The plans show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today 78
- The plans show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today 73
- The chart below shows the result of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities 73
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- The image below shows the process of making carbonated drinks 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 102, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun ingredient seems to be countable; consider using: 'several ingredients'.
Suggestion: several ingredients
...ps utilizing various devices as well as several ingredient which the final product will be sent to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, then, third, well, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98701298701 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62028878322 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5413198872 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111936824365 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571010369893 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821306109181 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886004609267 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883894308781 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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