Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
A would have to agree with the statemant that young people enjoy life more than older people do. In this essay I will provide you with some of the reasons I think young people usually enjoy life more than older people, and they will be thoroughly disscused.
First of all, in my experiance, younger people tend to have more positive aditude towards life. I think that this is connected with the amount of energy they have. It is a well known fact that younger people have more energy than older poeple. They have to spend this enery somewhere and I believe that this is the reasons they are prone to throw themselves into milion activities at once. That way they don’t have time too complain about life, unlike older people.
Secondly, I think that younger people enjoy life more than older people because they are willing to try new things and learn new skills. Older people usually think that they have learned all there is or that is too late for them to learn new stuff. Younger people, on the other hand, can’t wait to jump on the oportunity to try something new and exciting. I think that this is because younger people are not fully aware of the danger they can put themselves in by doing something new and that this is the reason why they are more pron to try them. When it comes to older people, they have seen a lot of bad stuff in their life and are much more calculated regarding making risky decisions.
Lastly, I think that maybe the strongest reason why younger people tend to enjoy life more than older people is that they don’t know what lays ahead. For young people everything is new and if they don’t try everything life is offering how can they know what they like and what is not quite for them. Younger people also know that they have a lot more time left and even if they make a mistake there is time left to fix it. Worst case scenario mistake becomes another funny storry to tell.
For listed reasons I am convinced that young people are more optimistic and that they tend to enjoy life more than older people. This of course doesn’t mean that there are no exeptons and that some older people couldn’t have as much fun as young people have.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
.... In this essay I will provide you with some of the reasons I think young people usually en...
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Message: Did you mean 'to complain'?
Suggestion: to complain
... at once. That way they don’t have time too complain about life, unlike older people. Secon...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Worst'.
Suggestion: The Worst
...a mistake there is time left to fix it. Worst case scenario mistake becomes another f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, i think, of course, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48743718593 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03174224897 2.67179642975 76% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.41959798995 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0841370004 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2222222222 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385513172651 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167428159705 0.076458572812 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162930065306 0.0737576698707 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300237149542 0.150856017488 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160272373389 0.0645574589148 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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