Some people say that celebrities add to the glory of nation whereas others say they are subjected to media intervention, should media be allowed to interfere in the private life of the celebrities?
Write both the view and give your opinion.
Prominent personalities hold a special place in the society and it is often argued by few that those personalities glorifies the native country as a result of overly emphasized by media. Certainly, media has other significant issues to cover up instead of giving undeserving attention to celebrities.
Such influx interference on famous icons are in abundance. Today's media is driven with the sole objective of earning more. Due to this cynical ideology, often prejudices can be seen where the news channels keep showing the irrelevant celebrity updates despite of covering national issues. Hitting the highest TRP, rather than showing the important news is trending and the celebrities are becoming their favorite topic. Moreover, the ever rising publicity stunts by struggling actors keep fetching the media to prove that they are second to none.
By contrast, broadcasting agencies, undoubtedly, has more to contribute in spite of covering the personal lives of them. They ought to restrict their parameters to give awareness to the specific topics. Activists, sports personalities and actors has every right to make their nation proud, but, not on the cost of diverting the audience to wrongful. Apparently, the lives of these celebrities seem spic and span from the outer world, shockingly, most of them can be found as drug addicts and under vicious circle of debt. Media have to understand their moral code of conduct and stick to the useful content.
To conclude, over concentration on celebrities by media is a sheer waste of time and effort, thus, rightful information should be the utmost priority of broadcasting agencies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, if, moreover, second, so, thus, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34615384615 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89167341654 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5462955576 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.923076923 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198490165555 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618526487074 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350187322691 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116565072203 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240789469025 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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