You have a spare room in your flat/apartment and you want to rent it to a student. Write a letter to the accommodation office of the local college. In your letter explain
where your apartment is
why you want to rent
what sort of person who would you like to rent it to.
Dear sir
I am one of the house owners in Alex enclave who is penning down this missive in connection to find a student as a tenant for a spare room in my flat.
The place is not only 2 km away from your prestigious college, which can be of great help for a student renting my room, but also is in the close proximity of various shopping complexes. As you are already aware, the academic year has ended few days back, as a consequence one of the educatees who was living in that room had to leave because of his completion of studies. That is why, I am looking for a new one now.
On the other hand, please set up my meeting with someone who is quiet and decent. Besides this, he should be able to teach my younger sibling some basic mathematics.
I hope you will suggest me few learners who are in search of a room so that I can discuss the other details further with them.
Thanking you in anticipation.
Yours faithfully
Arshdeep Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...ent renting my room, but also is in the close proximity of various shopping complexes. As you a...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you in anticipation. Yours faithfully Arshdeep Kaur
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, look, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32960893855 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44418355896 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670391061453 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8821888646 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1111111111 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188276537484 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075925909715 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557811273873 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101642989667 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550472964989 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.