Your local council is closing the children’s playground in your locality as not many children visit the park. Write a letter to the council requesting not to close it. Include the following in your letter:
– How important is the playground for children?
– Why don’t children go to the playground?
– What can be done to bring children back to the park?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to elicit a grave concern about the recent decision of closing the kids park in Rajnagar Extension, Ghaziabad.
Let me elaborate you in detail. I am Jai Prakash, residing in Ashiana Palm Court, Rajnagar Extension, Ghaziabad. Yesterday I was reading newspaper and got to know that our society park is going to close soon. I was amazed to read that news.
This park plays an indispensable role not only for our kids but also for our elders. It is a rich source of playing outdoor games and help in revitalizing kids. Moreover, elderly people take walk and it is a good place to socialize too. The other crucial thing is that there is no other park in our vicinity.
On the other side, the ground is not in good condition due to lack of cleaning and there are shortage of sports equipment's. As a result, no adolescents want to go there.
Last but not least, I am requesting you to take some prompt action to clean the park and buy some modern sports equipment so that we can get back our kids to park.
At last please think again regarding this decision. I am waiting for your reply.
Yours faithfully
Jai
- Some people believe that elderly employees are more useful to a company while others believe that young employees are better Discuss both views and give your own opinion 71
- An increasing number of children have become hooked on fast food and aerated drinks that do not provide much nutrition This poor diet has led to a rise in obesity among children What are the problems that are associated with obesity in children and what s 82
- You would like to attend a training course. Write a letter to your company manager and say– Why would you like to attend this course?– Why would it be beneficial for you and the company?– Suggest how to arrange time for it. 67
- People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 56
- You have recently attended a professional course Write a letter to your manager to thank him her for the opportunity and say What was it about Explain why it was helpful to you Suggest other co workers participate in this course 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 106, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...n to clean the park and buy some modern sports equipment so that we can get back our k...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, regarding, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53738317757 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50123997549 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621495327103 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9350546982 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.6875 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.375 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117364761613 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375779445139 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528614849418 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0526030249135 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348978531806 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.