The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not home to care for their children.
Some individuals share the belief that in order to solve the booming number of youth offenders, the women should stay at home, spend enormous time in taking care of children. Doing so, they would lessen the social issue in which young people are engaged.
Furthermore, some people still believe in the common expression "Mother knows best" Because, of the strong bond during gestation, mother's intuition is good for children even without knowing the persona of the child. In addition, some say that values begin at home, women should set a good example all the time; like helping the chi...
- The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not home to care for their childre 80
- The graph below gives information on wages of some country over a ten year period 68
- The graph below describes average house in some town in 2005. 70
- The chart below describes results of a public opinion poll, where people were asked to name the most important place smoking should be banned from. 70
- The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is to raise the age limit for younger driver and to lower the age limit for elderly ones. Do you agree? 80
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 374 350
No. of Characters: 1747 1500
No. of Different Words: 216 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.398 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.671 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.454 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 122 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.594 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.412 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.284 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.536 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.089 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5