Your local council is closing the children's playground in your locality as not many children visit the park.
Write a letter to the council requesting not to close it. Include the following in your letter.
-How important is the playground for children
-Why dont children go to the playground
-What can be done to bring children back to the park.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am Nirav Dave, a resident of Rochman boulevard. I have just got the news about the proposal to close children's sports ground
located near Scarborough Golf Club intersection. I am writing this letter to request to take corrective actions instead of closing it permanently.
Indeed, this playground is only available facility which holds an immense significance for children get familiarize with
copious outdoor games which strengthen them physically. Otherwise, most of indoor games which are preferred tend to develop health related issue such as obesity. Despite knowing this fact, some offsprings do not go to this area because of certain reasons.
One prime cause of it is poor condition of sports facility. some equipments are not maintained properly and at higher risk of causing unwanted accidents. Another reason is poor condition of ground. It is observed that some of people throw household garbage on this area which has made it messy which increases risk of spreading numerous infirmities.
In order to solve these problems, I would appreciate if you install safe and contemporary sports instruments including swings, sliders. In addition, if you make some arrangement for cleaning and proper surfacing of this open space along with strict actions against those who would make it dirty, pupils would certainly be attracted to come and play here.
Hope you would accept my request and take appropriate actions for the benefit of locals.
Yours faithfully,
Nirav Dave.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...icance for children get familiarize with copious outdoor games which strengthen t...
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Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
...ondition of ground. It is observed that some of people throw household garbage on this area wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4135021097 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7776150498 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.700421940928 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1811005972 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6428571429 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120488549233 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385760352937 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518244476831 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571991950046 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05007457274 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.