Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
We are living in the heyday of information era, consequently, every day we're surrounded by vast area of technology which needs comprehensive literacy to pursue these achievements. In my opinion, we should have expansive knowledge about variety of academic subjects rather than specialize in one of them.
To begin with, the faster growth in the technology, the most important for mankind to be aware of all various aspects of knowledge. Because of many advancements in science, we will confront with novelties in Physics, Chemistry, Biology, and so forth. In order to understand these fields, we should broaden our knowledge through academic subjects. Moreover, it is imperative to be familiar with all different subjects, specifically for students to become able of choosing which part they prefer to focus on, in their upper-level educations. Thus, it is useful to have broad knowledge of all subjects, for either all people live in society or students of universities.
Besides that, it would heighten our chances to have jobs in many fields if we'll be literate in more than one area of science. Specially, in the Covid-19 pandemic, we could see that many people have lost their jobs, but who is prepared themselves for this kind of situation can earn money steadily. My personal experience is a compelling example of what I mean. When my brother laid off from his job, he has started investments in the stock market. He has obtained his knowledge in stock marketing for two years and now he is eventually, ready to use his knowledge to earn money even after losing his previous job.
To recap, I firmly believe that in this period of time, we should have vast knowledge of many academic subjects rather than be specific in one subject. It is of necessity to have literacy in every field, for all people who live in the technological era and for students who want to continue their educations as well. In addition, it could help us find another way to earn money besides our current jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, thus, well, i mean, in addition, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92581602374 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8008945932 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578635014837 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1174711782 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210251359664 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071465058426 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843935442093 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132784957391 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035252832831 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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