The Northern Land Brigdge
Both the the reading and the lecture discuss about migration of first people to the north America. While the reading says that first people to migrate to north America were from eastern Asia and they migrate through land known as Beringia, the lecture disagrees.
First, the lecture claims that first people who migrate used terrain named Beringia. However, the lecture insists that new research on DNA of American people suggest that first people were from syberia and they might come 40,000 years ago, long before native americans.
Next, The reading asserts that artifacts made by the people from Asia found. In contrast, the lecture argues that the tool was found by archaeologist are 19,000 year old. In fact, the evidance suggest that the people from Asia were came 11,000 to 13,000 years ago, thousands of years after the date of orignal artifacts made which discovered from New Mexico region of North America.
Finally, the reading state that Asian people cross Beringia bridge after the ice melt. On the other hand, the lecture points out that ice on Beringia would’ve melt 13000 years ago and century must have take them to cross the bridge. Some migrated people were came to North america 15000 years ago many years before the Asian people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom New Mexico region of North America. Finally, the reading state that Asian pe...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...t 13000 years ago and century must have take them to cross the bridge. Some migrated...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, so, while, in contrast, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 1373.03311258 77% => OK
No of words: 210.0 270.72406181 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02380952381 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02674297207 2.5805825403 79% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 145.348785872 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 419.366225166 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.638689727 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 110.228320801 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06452816374 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0145880980294 0.272083759551 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00689550228448 0.0996497079465 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0206865068534 0.0662205650399 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0115987944501 0.162205337803 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200897012941 0.0443174109184 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 63.6247240618 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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