: In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they hard enough advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message
There is no denying the fact that the phenomenon of hardwork is ubiquitous across the globe due to its paramount important. One school of thought opine that it is worthless, however others consider that a couple of problems also occur because of the same. Although this has a plethora of merits yet numerous demerits are also there which will be elaborated in upcoming paragraphs
Initiating with the best positive benefits, the most significant advantage is a positive encouragement gives productive results,. It motivates and keeps energetic in life which is a definite path to success. along with it, hardwork builds character, as a result, they can develop a disciplined life moreover that helps to be more patient towards any challenges and become successful
On the paradoxical side, there are many drawbacks as well. First and foremost, it puts more pressure on children and force them to abandon leisures. As a result it develops mental as well as health problems among them. In addition, focusing so much on hardwork creates less time for play. Consequently, these leads pupils become obese
In conclude, without any doubt, this is a mixed bag. If this topic has many positives and the negative points of this notion may not be underestimated and I would like to say that it's parents responsibility to motivate them meanwhile take care of their health also
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- In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they hard enough advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message 56
- In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they hard enough advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message 56
- In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they hard enough advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07522123894 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83528898953 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663716814159 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5269575799 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.7 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0937197440112 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279188184304 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301215002424 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0480332026146 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250325534094 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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