An historic building in your city is in bad condition. Write to the local government. Include in your letter:
Why the building is important
Its present condition
What action must be taken
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to draw your attention to the condition of St. Maria’s Cathedral on Main Street. The matter of fact is that the church is a historical building, which has remained among the few as a heritage from the medieval era in our city. In addition, it is a fabulous example of Gothic architecture with a striking feature of the church steeple.
Unfortunately, today the Cathedral falls into decay and demands an urgent renovation. The main important issue of it is that the roof has holes and during the rain, the inner part of the church becomes flooded. That is why the walls in some parts of it are moldy and wet.
Therefore, I would like to recommend adding the church to the list of required funding buildings in our city for the next financial year. It also would be great if the city council organized a fundraising event in the favor of the church. Thus, the volunteers would be able to start the renovation of the roof as soon as possible.
I appreciate your attention to this matter.
Sincerely yours,
Marie Cherry
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| 2020-11-26 | Mariamirabella | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atter. Sincerely yours, Marie Cherry
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73655913978 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67640975049 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5446407719 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0909090909 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154948001837 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470760493633 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400388992467 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829878954194 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179075991318 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.